Mabel Ping-Hua Lee: How Chinese-American Women Helped Shape the Suffrage Movement
by Cathleen D. Cahill (excerpt)
Read the sentence from Sylvia's argumentative essay.
There are a lot, like 92%, of people who believe that all schools should have art education, but I disagree.
Which choice best shows how the sentence can be rewritten with a formal style and an objective tone?
A.
Some researchers took a survey of people, and I'm really surprised that 92% of them thought we should have art in schools.
B.
While I disagree, 92% of the people surveyed in a recent study think all schools should provide art education.
C.
The results from a recent study show that 92% of the people surveyed think all schools should provide art education.
D.
I find it hard to believe that 92% of people think schools should provide art classes.