Why is the argument ineffective? In a paragraph of 7–10 complete sentences, explain why the following parts of the argument are ineffective, and how they can be improved:

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Instructions: The following argument argues for owning pets. Read the argument and answer the question that follows:

Topic and Question

Pets: Should people own pets?

Ineffective Argument

I love animals so much. I know that animals love humans, so why do people want to ban the ownership of pets? I don’t get it.

The first reason I should be able to own a pet is that I love animals. My family loves having a pet. Our dog is like a part of the family. My parents take care of her and take her to the doctor just like they do with me. My mom says, “I don’t know what I would do without little Josie!”

I think that people should own pets because they are helpful. My friend just told me about a neighbor whose pet parrot woke her up in the middle of the night when there was a fire. It saved her life. What a lucky person to own a parrot.

Honestly, what would we do without our pets?