Hello, I'm writing a story for school (10 pages) and I need to know if this is a good start, If I should change anything, add anything, etc. I also need a title I have a few options but I don't know if they are all that good (Help me decide, or if you have an idea lmk) If anyone could help I would appreciate it. :)

What it takes to secure the waves (I)

Akin with the waves

United with the sea

Allied with the sea (I)

Ocean freak