i need help starting an essay is this good or not?

Throughout time and history, women have been always seen as the lesser counterpart.

Respuesta :

Is this your thesis or your opening statement?  If it’s an opening statement, it’s a very good hook to pique the reader’s interest.  If it’s a thesis, you need some more structure and evidence to back it up.

Answer:

yes

Explanation:

Make sure to back it up with supporting details. that can be varied as facts, but make sure to keep it in your own words not just coping.