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At that time, everyone in the village had picked up a piece of paper for themselves and kept it tightly closed but Mr. Grave helped the children take the paper and he took the child’s hand and opened it the child feel anxious and fear that the child was wrong in law when the people there had not opened the paper yet and that was his mind and decision and that was not right rate they have given.——- Please help me to fixed the comma slice and correct sentence.

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“At that time, everyone in the village had picked up a piece of paper for themselves and kept it tightly closed. Mr. Grave helped the children take the paper, and would take a child’s hand to open it. The child felt anxious and fearful that they were wrong when other’s had not opened their papers yet. His mind hadn’t chose the right decision.”

the last few sentences confused me quite a bit, and the grammar in this is horrible, but i did some of it...hope i can help!!