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How could you improve this message? The Human Resources department is happy to announce a career development workshop led by Joseph Pelletier. He has 20 years of experience in career development training and will help you gain a clearer understanding of your career goals he will also discuss tools to work toward your career goals. The workshop will take place November 10 and 11, and it will start at 9:30 a.M. And end at 5:30 p.M., and there will be coffee and tea in the morning lunch will be provided in the afternoon. Respond to this e-mail to sign up because only 40 spaces are available.

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The answer is in my explanation

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First I would fix the misplaced characters, and I wouldn't add the last sentence in that way. I would rather write it like this: "To sign up for the workshop respond to this email. Hope to see you soon!" or sth like this to make people motivated about going to the workshop.

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