Respuesta :
Explanation:
Dear Coworker,
I am writing this in order to share my feedback on your department memorandum that you had written.
Overall this is a good memo but you can make it slightly better if you adapt below points;
- Reduce the size of memo, its a bit large
- Rewrite that using more simple vocabulary
While rewriting you shouldn't change following things
- The main context of memo
- The people it is addressed for.
- The timelines in the memo
I hope this little feedback will be valuable feedback
Answer:
Refer below for the answer.
Explanation:
To: Coworker
From: ABC
Date: March 10, 2020
Subject: Feedback for memo
After a careful consideration, the memo is good enough but need some of initial mistakes to be corrected, while revising the Memo I identify three things that shouldn't be improve. See below:
● The main reason for writing the memo.
● The audience for the memo.
● The objective tone.
Hope this helps you out. Looking forward for the good one.
