I am writing a compare and contrast essay for my English course on Employed Students vs. Unemployed Students. I am having trouble with the two body paragraphs.
Paragraph 1: similarities
Paragraph 2: differences
I'm not asking for anyone to write the paragraphs for me, I just need help with the similarities and differences to write about, can someone please give me any ideas? and ideas will help, please :(
Also if someone can check my introduction, just to make sure it its written well, or if there are any grammar issues or wrong punctuations
My Introduction Paragraph:
Many students in high school hold a job whether it be in a fast food restaurant, or a grocery store. While some think that having a job is good to have while being in school, some wait till after their education years to work. The amount of teens having a job has gone down since the 1970s. From 1975 the percentage of teens working went from around 75% to 55% in 2014. Both students working and students unemployed share a want to have a great, well provided life; however students who have a job may find it harder to focus on their studies, while students who are unemployed may have a better time focusing on their studies.