Can you plz revise this sentense


Lorraine Hansberry was born in Chicago. She attended grammar and high school there. She attended the University of Wisconsin. Then she went to Incipient York. She became involved in the theater. She indited A Raisin in the Sun . She was the first African American to win the Incipient York Drama Reprehenders Circle Award.

Respuesta :

the rest is good besides the stuff at the bottom

Explanation:

mixed mixed the second and third sentence instead of a period on the second sentence do a comma. for for the sentence she became involved with theater mix it with the next sentence with a comma instead of a period.