3.6.5 Quiz: Using Transitions
Which revision of the passage makes the best use of transitions?
Mars has fascinated scientists for centuries. Going to Mars will be
difficult. Astronauts who travel to the "Red Planet' will be exposed to
dangerous radiation for long periods of time. A journey to Mars will be
extremely expensive.
A. Mars has fascinated scientists for centuries. Moreover, going to
Mars will be difficult. Astronauts who travel to the "Red Planet"
will also be exposed to dangerous radiation for long periods of
time. On the other hand, a journey to Mars will be extremely
expensive.
B. Mars has fascinated scientists for centuries. Unfortunately, going
to Mars will be difficult. Also, astronauts who travel to the "Red
Planet' will be exposed to dangerous radiation for long periods of
time. In conclusion, a journey to Mars will be extremely expensive.
C. Mars has fascinated scientists for centuries. However, going to
Mars will be difficult. Astronauts who travel to the "Red Planet will
be exposed to dangerous radiation for long periods of time.
Furthermore, a journey to Mars will be extremely expensive.
D. Mars has fascinated scientists for centuries. Indeed, going to
Mars will be difficult. In contrast, astronauts who travel to the 'Red
Planet will be exposed to dangerous radiation for long periods of
time. Finally, a journey to Mars will be extremely expensive.
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