what do y'all think of my first song lyrics (plz don't mean and some words might be messing bc it's 4:00 am and I'm very tired) and if y'all have any advice on making the lyrics better plz tell me have a nice night or day :)​​

what do yall think of my first song lyrics plz dont mean and some words might be messing bc its 400 am and Im very tired and if yall have any advice on making t class=