Read the following e-mail, which needs revising, editing, and proofreading:

Hi Ms. Johnson, Thanks you so much for the opportunity to meet with you and discuss the job. I am grateful to be considered for the job. I’d be great there with my expereince. When will I be hearing from you?

Which revision below is most effective?

Ms. Johnson,

Thank you for the opportunity to meet with you and discuss the astronaut program. I am grateful to be considered for the position. I think I would be a great fit at NASA, especially given my experiences as a test pilot, free diving champion, and aeronautical engineer. I look forward to hearing from you and working together in the future.

Ms. Johnson,

Thank you for the interview. I am grateful to be considered for the program, and I feel my experience makes me a good fit for your organization. I look forward to hearing from you.

Hi again, Ms. Johnson,

Thank you so much for meeting me to discuss becoming an astronaut. I’d be grateful to get a job. It’s the fifth time I’ve applied, but “if at first you don’t succeed,” right? I’d be great there with my many experiences of being abducted by aliens. Call me!

Ms. Johnson,

Thank you so very much for the kind opportunity to meet with you and thoroughly discuss the fantastic astronaut program at NASA. I am deeply grateful to be considered for this amazing job. I sincerely believe that I’d be a definite asset to all the fine people there with my extensive experience. I genuinely anticipate hearing good news at your earliest convenience.

Thank you so very much for the kind opportunity to meet with you and thoroughly discuss the fantastic astronaut program at NASA. I am deeply grateful to be considered for this amazing job. I sincerely believe that I’d be a definite asset to all the fine people there with my extensive experience. I genuinely anticipate hearing good news at your earliest convenience.

Explanation:

I think that is the answer because this seems very formal, and my dad writes lots of these types of emails to his bosses...

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7777flowers 7777flowers · Answer 2 · 2022-01-11T04:48:17+01:00

The revision that would be the most effective would be the last one.

“Ms. Johnson,

Thank you so very much for the kind opportunity to meet with you and thoroughly discuss the fantastic astronaut program at NASA. I am deeply grateful to be considered for this amazing job. I sincerely believe that I’d be a definite asset to all the fine people there with my extensive experience. I genuinely anticipate hearing good news at your earliest convenience.”