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I need feedback about my poem
The virus
My friend and I used to be friends
but then the virus
My friend “didn’t have a phone, so we lost touch
It might be rude but still
My friend and I used to be good friends ever since school started.
Now that we are back in school, I sit there sad, with no one to talk to but all of these degenerates.
. I honestly don’t know what I did wrong.
Honestly don’t think that friend understands that what my friend did was wrong.
But it’s ok. I don’t blame him for that
good news my friend was online on discord
The bad news is he just ignored me
So I guess you can say that the way we “solved our problem by letting it go.
Until I got a dm, it was from my friend. It said hi.

Respuesta :

adengorib

Answer:

It sounds "Great" to me :D

Explanation:

Poems don't have to rhyme so this sounds really good. Maybe put the word he or she instead of friend so many times.

" Honestly don’t think that friend understands that what my friend did was wrong". Try writing it like this

Honestly, I don’t think that friend understands that what he did was wrong.

Also the good news part needs a comma or just end the sentence there and add a bit more. After discord it needs a period. Again, put a period or comma, the s in so is capitalized. Not all people will know what a dm is, so put the full word, direct message. By letting it go, put that " symbol. And instead of It said hi, say he said hi. That's all I could spot. If you want, please mark me brainliest.
it sounds very good, accurate feelings of evb

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