Respuesta :
What Danielle should most focus on when revising her thesis statement for formal language is:
- Her use of slang
What is slang?
Slang is an informal language that has no place in academic writing. Slangs are also not required in thesis statements because these stress the main point of the text which will be discussed in more detail.
In the thesis above, Danielle's use of slang like; "to make the plot go" is inappropriate. Danielle should use academic language to show the progression of events in the plot of the story.
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Answer: B. Her use of slang
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