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Claim: Even though reality TV shows are entertaining, they should not be televised.

Reason 1: They encourage negative racial stereotypes and prejudice.

Support for Reason 1: "A study showed that reality television viewing encourages negative racial stereotypes and prejudice" Sentence from excerpt by Cavender and Bond-Maupin.

Reason 2: It gives an influence on aggression of people.

Support for Reason 2: "The more realistic the aggression is on the show, the more this influences the viewer." Sentence from excerpt by Dr. Douglas Gentile


Counterclaim: Many people believe that reality TV shows good influence on their children.

Rebuttal Support: There are no positive quotations in the evidence in the question.

Conclusion Clincher: If reality Tv shows keep going on, children will be watching them and start acting rude. The world will change horribly if these reality tv shows keep going on.