An example of how we can rewrite the sentences using standard English and formal communication is the following:
1. The artist has an interesting way of perceiving the world.
2. The person in the next room is a childhood acquaintance of mine.
3. The speaker was dressed nicely, in an appropriate outfit, and a delightful scarf.
4. Even though all horses ran fast, the fastest one won the race.
5. A boy adopted a puppy and, after playing all afternoon in the sun, they sat under the tree by the house before going inside for the night.
- In general, words such as "cool", "cute" and "kind of" are considered informal. Their use should be avoided in writing or when the situation is more formal.
- When we speak informally, we tend to use a more restricted vocabulary. Sometimes, we explain something instead of just saying the word for it.
- That is what happens in sentence 2, for example. Someone you know is your acquaintance. When writing or speaking formally, it is best to use the word "acquaintance" then to explain it.
- In numbers 4 and 5, the sentences are a bit confusing and repetitive. We must, in the former, eliminate anything that is unnecessary from the sentence and, in the latter, reorder it in a way that makes more sense.
- Formal language avoids the use of slang and pays full attention to grammatical rules.
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